Nova Class LCARS Display(s)

[Ryan]

I've been mapping a Nova class ship for the game Elite Force (1), and I kinda came across a hurdle when it came to LCARS (the stock ones...well, are worse than mine, so thats saying something, lol). Anyway, I've been trying to make up my own, but I'm not too sure about them, and I would appreciate feedback/suggestions from people who are much better than me lol. Anyway, take a look, but don't be too nasty :P.

[deif]

wow, a wonderful beginning. your graphic looks good.
i like the different lcars monitor displays in it. in my opinion you've the liabilty to connect things. the grey brackets are too much connected with each other. now it looks a little bit too much like a pipe system. ;)
just my two cents to it.
keep the good work up!

[Ryan]

I've made a little update, I've left the pipes to the plumbers and adjusted the colours and stuff. I'm not sure if I'm happy with this or not so please, give feedback!

LINK HERE (http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/Slipstream537/6d507deb.png)

[deif]

hey. looks much better in terms of the overall style. you do a great work keep it up!
just one detail in the forward navigational scan lcars. in star trek they mostly use a logo for a ship and not a dot - just as seen on the attached example
as is said: keep your good work up!

[Ryan]

An update, albiet a bit late!

Anyway, tell me what you think (downloaded the CS4 trial today and made this so...)

- Ry

(This is part of a larger project for EF)

[Ryan]

Full display put together...

[deif]

great work, ryan. looks very clear.
the only thing i would do is to put a little bit more details into the screens (e.g. numbers to the stars and also in the forward nav screen. just my two cents.
look forward to see more of your project.