Titan Class MSD ( Not Luna Class !!)

[SFelser]

Hello,

here are my version of an future ( 2399 ) Starflett vessel called U.S.S. PHANTOM !



http://www3.pic-upload.de/24.12.09/7t8k7wdqqdg6.jpg

[deif]

hi sfelser!

welcome here at lcarsc.com! nice work you share with us here. the MSD looks very detailed, but at some points the pieces looks a bit odd e.g the trees in the arboretum, the torp launchers, the workbee-shaped things at several places and so on. i like to encourage you to use the same detailed style overall like the details for the quarters. just my two cents.

[Robert]

Welcome to the LCARS community SFelser
Deif has a good point, keeping a common level of details throughout your msd is important.

Your arboretum looks nice. But you should probably have more trees instead of just 4 (the scale just seems off to me). I haven't seen this ship but it would also seem that the scale for the impulse engine is too big as well.

But I love your stellar cartography. The layout and colours are also very good.

Thanks for posting and hope to see more.

[SFelser]

Here are my updated Version !



http://www2.pic-upload.de/12.01.10/n5eh2n6wc28t.jpg

[SFelser]

Here are my Pool Table


http://www2.pic-upload.de/13.01.10/3fkffnic3sq.jpg

[Robert]

Hi SFelser
the MSD looks a lot better. My last comment on it are "component id lines". You know those lines that says "main bridge" and then points it out. Well some of them are touching the appropriate component but some like the impusle engine stops at the hull. Just make that line go a bit lower. Also the "main deflector" one should be remove. I know it's ridiculous, but those lines should not be going through the LCARS frame.

Those are just my personal opinions. You've done a good job so far. As for your pooltable. Well the link isn't working for me.

Thanks for posting.